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Yusuf Kutlay Says:
Mayıs 20th, 2009 at 00:14OBESITY
Today,obesity big and dangerous problem which frightens all people.The reasons of the problem obesity people,eating much and general change to human body.In this essay ı will suggest some ways to prevent obesity problems.
In the first line,it would be good idea to encourge to eat fresh meals and regular times.In this way we can prevent to take a lot of kilos.
Secondly,it would help us to benefit from dietician.For instance people to get good eating future.This would cause not to take a lot of kilos.
Finally,another way is to obesity people would to run operation in hospital.This would cause we will be free!
Taking evreything account threr are many ways to prevent obessity problem.Usable fresh food benefiting from people and usuable times are among these solutions.If we apply them the obbesity people can be lose to kilos better.
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Yusuf Kutlay Says:
Mayıs 20th, 2009 at 17:53thank you Mr. KAYGUSUZ
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fatma Says:
Eylül 5th, 2009 at 12:35Scıence has gradually been improving so rapidly for eras.More than one hundred experiments are conducted by groups of scıentısts every year and the overwhelmıng majorıty of them attains successful consequences.However some of scıentıfıc tests are sometımes exposed to heavy crıtıcısım because of some culturel,social and relıgious values or ıdeologıcal approaches.The study of clonıng ıs one of the scıentıfıc tests whıch are harshly crıtıcızed by some of the publıc.Opponents of clonıng tests argue that clonıng experıments can bear traumatıc outcomes for humanıty.however,ın my opinion,clonıng test can be benefıcal for human beıngs ın terms of new ways of treatments for lıfe-treatıng and ıncurable dıseases.
It can be argued that studies of clonıng of can be dangerous ın wrong hands.malacoıus people can aım at creatıng an army whıch ıs consıst of powerful cloned soldıers.as an example,Stalın who was the leader of the former sovıet unıon used to practıse experıments so as to create human-monkey soldıers by usıng reproductıon tecnıques whıch are the maın step of clonıng methods durıng second world war.this experıment became unsuccessful but a host of innocent Turkısh people got kılled durıng thıs studıes.however everythıng good can be mıssused by bad people.the classıc case of thıs is dıscovery of atom whıch ıs the smallest part of an element.atom ıs used to ınvent weapons of mass destructıon and to treat people who are serıously ıll.by agency of the tecnıques whıch ıs based on atom molecules, a great deal of people can recover from lıfe treatıng aılments.ıt ıs markedly seen that avoıdance from ınvestıgatıng only harm us.ıt ıs not the way to prevent vıcıous people from damagıng the pure.
Another argument ıs that clonıng tests can cause the subjects genetıc dısorders.as a result of thıs experıment,the ındıvıduals who are not healthy due to the genetıc dısorders can be created.the subjects suffer from varıous ıllness unneccesarıly.thıs sıtuatıon ıs far from beıng humane.even ıt must be accepted as a crıme due to the fact that a person ıs injured conscıously.however today there ıs a huge number of dısabled people and ıs not a way of treatment for them.on account of clonıng tecnıques,dead cells can be made alıve so that dısability whose one of causes ıs dead cells wıll not be an ıncurable dısease and genetıc order can be changed for ınnate dısabled patıents who suffer from dısabılıty stem from genetıc disorders.that ıs clonıng tests are a chance for many ill people.
ıt can be concluded that scıentıfıc experıments are generally become successful so possıbılıty of failure cannot be a deterrent to us for leavıng examınatıon.besıdes ıt ıs a truısm to say that scıentıfıc fınds can be used for wrongly by malıcıous poeple but taken ınto consıderatıon theır benefıcıal aspects for human ıt ıs clearly seen that ıt ıs the only way to contunıe exıstence of human. -
Berat Nihat KAYGUSUZ Says:
Eylül 5th, 2009 at 17:32Thanks Fatma for her essay.
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karagunes Says:
Ocak 18th, 2010 at 20:14In recent years, online shopping has spread very quickly and became popular in the world .According to research conducted , the number of regular online shoppers in Europe has reached 50 million. Actually, this number confirms its popularity. There are loyal customers who always prefer to shop online and they have some common traits. For instance, they do not have enough time to go shopping or they do not like wasting lots of time in a shopping center. Online shopping has a reputation for being easy, comfortable and sometimes offers more appropriate prices. Despite providing many opportunities for the customers, online shopping may have some drawbacks, too.
The majority of the people prefer this way of shopping due to lack of time or an availability of the stores. With the help of online shopping, it is easy to reach to products of any brand in seconds. For instance, some people tend to wear fashionable or brand name clothes. However, they may not have an access to such products if their town does not have their favourite store. On the other hand, they can easily find online whatever they want. Similarly, through online shopping, consumers can follow the trends of some international brands such as, Levi’s and Adidas. Another advantage is that people can purchase not only clothes but also travel/concert/theater tickets, electrical goods and home machines without going out for shopping.
There are some problems with online shopping, though. For instance, some websites do not include enough information about a product; such as detailed prices. Another problem is that consumers may not receive the product on time, or even in the right colour. Then, when the product arrives, consumers feel disappointed as it does not fulfill his/her expectations. Another problem is safety. It is difficult for people to trust a certain website, if they are not familiar with that site or if they faced a security problem there. For example, if there are a lot of complaints about an internet site, other customers are influenced negatively. Being under the influence of these unhappy customers, most people avoid purchasing goods this way. However, if the majority of the online shoppers are satisfied with the service provided, they will tend to choose those internet sites. Therefore, it is important for companies to keep a good quality service.
As it is seen, with the help of technology, which brings people from many different part of the world together, shopping is much easier and comfortable, as long as it secure and of good quality. -
Berat Nihat KAYGUSUZ Says:
Ocak 18th, 2010 at 21:33Thanks Hüseyin for his essay.
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