Nihat Kaygusuz

Topic : Working mothers can be good mothers or not.Do you agree?

Information: We wrote this paragraph in bahcesehir prep. school.It is a kind of essay but we wrote as a paragraph.Also it is a opinion paragraph.

No one can deny the fact that everybody must work in order to earn money and survive.A great deal of women are affected by this situation and started to work too.However, they also have children.It is a debatable matter whether working mothers can be good mothers or not.Although a lot of people say that working mothers can not be good mothers , I completely disagree with this idea because of the fact that they can work and look after their children well at the same time.To my way of thinking, mothers who work absolutely can be succesful as a mother and a worker.The first and the most significant reason is that they can get experience easily and they can teach their children how life is.For instance,if a woman works for a company ,she can be aware of her responsibilities and shares how to take responsibilities with her own children.Also , working mothers know the diffuculties of working life such as finding a job , how to cope with stress etc. so she can transfer this knowledge to her children.Another reason is financal issues.What I mean is that working mothers not only give experiences to their children but also they earn money and provide their children with a comfortable life.For instance,mothers can support their hause and supply extra income.Therefore,the child who has a working mother can have a better education.Furthermore,the child can join social activities.The last important reason is that the mother who work knows the social life well.Therefore,they can prepare their children to social life.For example,a working mother has improved communication skills and she can be a model to their children.Also improved comminication skills help the child make new friends and solve problems with his/her friends.In the light of the topic I mentioned above we can say that working mothers can be succesful mothers too.

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