Essay Gönderme yazısına yapılan yorumlar http://www.nihatkaygusuz.com Nihat Kaygusuz'un kişisel sitesidir. Tue, 31 Aug 2010 18:23:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 Yazar: Berat Nihat KAYGUSUZ http://www.nihatkaygusuz.com/?page_id=151&cpage=1#comment-1668 Berat Nihat KAYGUSUZ Sun, 09 May 2010 08:46:06 +0000 http://www.nihatkaygusuz.com/?page_id=151#comment-1668 Emre ye gönderdiği paragraf için teşekkür ederim. Emre ye gönderdiği paragraf için teşekkür ederim.

]]> Yazar: Emre Ayaydın http://www.nihatkaygusuz.com/?page_id=151&cpage=1#comment-1619 Emre Ayaydın Fri, 23 Apr 2010 21:31:51 +0000 http://www.nihatkaygusuz.com/?page_id=151#comment-1619 Topic : Working mothers can be good mothers or not.Do you agree? Information: We wrote this paragraph in bahcesehir prep. school.It is a kind of essay but we wrote as a paragraph.Also it is a opinion paragraph. No one can deny the fact that everybody must work in order to earn money and survive.A great deal of women are affected by this situation and started to work too.However, they also have children.It is a debatable matter whether working mothers can be good mothers or not.Although a lot of people say that working mothers can not be good mothers , I completely disagree with this idea because of the fact that they can work and look after their children well at the same time.To my way of thinking, mothers who work absolutely can be succesful as a mother and a worker.The first and the most significant reason is that they can get experience easily and they can teach their children how life is.For instance,if a woman works for a company ,she can be aware of her responsibilities and shares how to take responsibilities with her own children.Also , working mothers know the diffuculties of working life such as finding a job , how to cope with stress etc. so she can transfer this knowledge to her children.Another reason is financal issues.What I mean is that working mothers not only give experiences to their children but also they earn money and provide their children with a comfortable life.For instance,mothers can support their hause and supply extra income.Therefore,the child who has a working mother can have a better education.Furthermore,the child can join social activities.The last important reason is that the mother who work knows the social life well.Therefore,they can prepare their children to social life.For example,a working mother has improved communication skills and she can be a model to their children.Also improved comminication skills help the child make new friends and solve problems with his/her friends.In the light of the topic I mentioned above we can say that working mothers can be succesful mothers too. Topic : Working mothers can be good mothers or not.Do you agree?

Information: We wrote this paragraph in bahcesehir prep. school.It is a kind of essay but we wrote as a paragraph.Also it is a opinion paragraph.

No one can deny the fact that everybody must work in order to earn money and survive.A great deal of women are affected by this situation and started to work too.However, they also have children.It is a debatable matter whether working mothers can be good mothers or not.Although a lot of people say that working mothers can not be good mothers , I completely disagree with this idea because of the fact that they can work and look after their children well at the same time.To my way of thinking, mothers who work absolutely can be succesful as a mother and a worker.The first and the most significant reason is that they can get experience easily and they can teach their children how life is.For instance,if a woman works for a company ,she can be aware of her responsibilities and shares how to take responsibilities with her own children.Also , working mothers know the diffuculties of working life such as finding a job , how to cope with stress etc. so she can transfer this knowledge to her children.Another reason is financal issues.What I mean is that working mothers not only give experiences to their children but also they earn money and provide their children with a comfortable life.For instance,mothers can support their hause and supply extra income.Therefore,the child who has a working mother can have a better education.Furthermore,the child can join social activities.The last important reason is that the mother who work knows the social life well.Therefore,they can prepare their children to social life.For example,a working mother has improved communication skills and she can be a model to their children.Also improved comminication skills help the child make new friends and solve problems with his/her friends.In the light of the topic I mentioned above we can say that working mothers can be succesful mothers too.

]]> Yazar: Berat Nihat KAYGUSUZ http://www.nihatkaygusuz.com/?page_id=151&cpage=1#comment-1381 Berat Nihat KAYGUSUZ Mon, 18 Jan 2010 19:33:44 +0000 http://www.nihatkaygusuz.com/?page_id=151#comment-1381 Thanks Hüseyin for his essay. Thanks Hüseyin for his essay.

]]> Yazar: karagunes http://www.nihatkaygusuz.com/?page_id=151&cpage=1#comment-1380 karagunes Mon, 18 Jan 2010 18:14:13 +0000 http://www.nihatkaygusuz.com/?page_id=151#comment-1380 In recent years, online shopping has spread very quickly and became popular in the world .According to research conducted , the number of regular online shoppers in Europe has reached 50 million. Actually, this number confirms its popularity. There are loyal customers who always prefer to shop online and they have some common traits. For instance, they do not have enough time to go shopping or they do not like wasting lots of time in a shopping center. Online shopping has a reputation for being easy, comfortable and sometimes offers more appropriate prices. Despite providing many opportunities for the customers, online shopping may have some drawbacks, too. The majority of the people prefer this way of shopping due to lack of time or an availability of the stores. With the help of online shopping, it is easy to reach to products of any brand in seconds. For instance, some people tend to wear fashionable or brand name clothes. However, they may not have an access to such products if their town does not have their favourite store. On the other hand, they can easily find online whatever they want. Similarly, through online shopping, consumers can follow the trends of some international brands such as, Levi’s and Adidas. Another advantage is that people can purchase not only clothes but also travel/concert/theater tickets, electrical goods and home machines without going out for shopping. There are some problems with online shopping, though. For instance, some websites do not include enough information about a product; such as detailed prices. Another problem is that consumers may not receive the product on time, or even in the right colour. Then, when the product arrives, consumers feel disappointed as it does not fulfill his/her expectations. Another problem is safety. It is difficult for people to trust a certain website, if they are not familiar with that site or if they faced a security problem there. For example, if there are a lot of complaints about an internet site, other customers are influenced negatively. Being under the influence of these unhappy customers, most people avoid purchasing goods this way. However, if the majority of the online shoppers are satisfied with the service provided, they will tend to choose those internet sites. Therefore, it is important for companies to keep a good quality service. As it is seen, with the help of technology, which brings people from many different part of the world together, shopping is much easier and comfortable, as long as it secure and of good quality. In recent years, online shopping has spread very quickly and became popular in the world .According to research conducted , the number of regular online shoppers in Europe has reached 50 million. Actually, this number confirms its popularity. There are loyal customers who always prefer to shop online and they have some common traits. For instance, they do not have enough time to go shopping or they do not like wasting lots of time in a shopping center. Online shopping has a reputation for being easy, comfortable and sometimes offers more appropriate prices. Despite providing many opportunities for the customers, online shopping may have some drawbacks, too.
The majority of the people prefer this way of shopping due to lack of time or an availability of the stores. With the help of online shopping, it is easy to reach to products of any brand in seconds. For instance, some people tend to wear fashionable or brand name clothes. However, they may not have an access to such products if their town does not have their favourite store. On the other hand, they can easily find online whatever they want. Similarly, through online shopping, consumers can follow the trends of some international brands such as, Levi’s and Adidas. Another advantage is that people can purchase not only clothes but also travel/concert/theater tickets, electrical goods and home machines without going out for shopping.
There are some problems with online shopping, though. For instance, some websites do not include enough information about a product; such as detailed prices. Another problem is that consumers may not receive the product on time, or even in the right colour. Then, when the product arrives, consumers feel disappointed as it does not fulfill his/her expectations. Another problem is safety. It is difficult for people to trust a certain website, if they are not familiar with that site or if they faced a security problem there. For example, if there are a lot of complaints about an internet site, other customers are influenced negatively. Being under the influence of these unhappy customers, most people avoid purchasing goods this way. However, if the majority of the online shoppers are satisfied with the service provided, they will tend to choose those internet sites. Therefore, it is important for companies to keep a good quality service.
As it is seen, with the help of technology, which brings people from many different part of the world together, shopping is much easier and comfortable, as long as it secure and of good quality.

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